Lets learn about rain today.....
by tolovemoon

Comment by puzzled:
It's easy to see that effort went into making this - the rubber ducky is a nice touch! The image has some problems for me, though: I wish the blue plastic thing weren't there, the fence confuses me because I can't figure out what that silver thing is at the left of it, and the baby in the foreground is overexposed.

Lets learn about rain today.....
by tolovemoon

Comment by JunieMoon:
A bit busy. Too much in the picture. Not sure where to look.

Lets learn about rain today.....
by tolovemoon

Comment by Rikki:
this is very snapshot like... the little oys shirt is a bit blown... nothing much to say really except probably a better composition of the image... the viewers eye (mine) is lead away from the image because my eye tends to follow what the little boy is looking at and when i look... there's hardly anything there except for the blocks and the rubber duck :( 5

Lets learn about rain today.....
by tolovemoon

Comment by SJCarter:
Looks like could be interesting shot. Not crazy about the "squeezed" look or the blown out sky. Still, has some appeal, but fact that can't see kids expressions detracts too.

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by tolovemoon

Comment by Strikeslip:
Can't see any rain, though it's implied, so IMO this shot barely meets the challenge. Congrats on catching the kids in poses like that at the same time, it's tough. Not much interest for me in this shot. The white shirt is blown out, on-camera flashes at close range are tough.

Lets learn about rain today.....
by tolovemoon

Comment by Jutilda:
This just seems like a snapshot. There is alot going on here, although I like the sentiment. I think just the boy on the left with the umbrella might've made a better subject by himself, but you'd have to change the title.

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by tolovemoon

Comment by Cools:
Scares me, looks like the little one is trying to climb in ...

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by tolovemoon

Comment by DeniseBernadette:
This is a pretty cluttered composition. There's way too much going on here and I don't really know what the focal point's supposed to be.

Lets learn about rain today.....
by tolovemoon

Comment by ergo:
fill flash is a bit strong and doesn't create drama. i'm not sure where the older kid is looking at. feels set up with the letter blocks and the ducky. 4

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by tolovemoon

Comment by Prof_Fate:
technicall lacking. sale price tag is OOF. overall image stikes me as noisy and soft and a bit too contrasty.