Cartier-Bresson Retake
by tvsometime

Comment by gg3rd:
Enticing image... It's interesting how the pattern on her dress matches the building. Excellent work!

Cartier-Bresson Retake
by tvsometime

Comment by colorcarnival:
Too bad "GAP" wasn't between the woman and the other two people.

Peppar Popper
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Comment by Lydia:
Oh... well done!


I may or may not be voting, so please do not equate my comment with any score.

Cartier-Bresson Retake
by tvsometime

Comment by EL-ROI:
Your second attempt got a lot of things right. The angle of the camera is better especially without the twisted horizon. The exposure is good and the PP is brighter with a wider range of highlights and shadows. A couple of things suffered in the second take such as the sharpness due to the camera shake. The blurred woman in the foreground is not a problem though as she is moving which adds to the dynamic feel.

Peppar Popper
by tvsometime

Comment by avalanche1030:
Great shot - easily could see in a magazine

Cartier-Bresson Retake
by tvsometime

Comment by jotaga:
Very well done! You found a good location and a model with clothes that resemble HCB years. I also like the motion blur on her (beautiful) legs. Gave you an 8 but will bump you up. Hope that this was not staged.

Cartier-Bresson Retake
by tvsometime

Comment by giantmike:
In Cartier-Bresson style, I think the blur of movement is spot on. But I wonder if that will end up hurting your overall score (I would have likely take a point off for it without the title).

Cartier-Bresson Retake
by tvsometime

Comment by Tiny:
Like the movement and angle.

Carousel
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Comment by PenelopeK:
Back to comment. Lots to like here, great idea, great spinning top and circles of light. It meets the challenge. On the other hand, I find it rather busy with the fence and tree cutting me off from what is most interesting rather than adding to the image. Also, a small but "nagging" issue for me, I find the girl's white sandals distracting because my eye keeps getting drawn back there. On further reflection.. this nicely captures a child's wonder with the spinning carousel, and the fence acts to provide the feeling of a child being on "the outside" looking "in" at where all the fun is going on. Perhaps a title to reflect that would have helped me appreciate the photo more immediately but I don't know, it's just a thought. I'm glad I took to time to explore it further.

Carousel
by tvsometime

Comment by galatia_n:
It's nice...imho it's better if cropped focusing more to the little girl and the carousel.