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Square Dancer
06/18/2009 10:40:33 AM
Square Dancer
by Soul

Comment by Ja-9:
what an interesting sculpture...
Square Dancer
06/16/2009 09:23:50 PM
Square Dancer
by Soul

Comment by jotaga:
I like it! But why did you chopped her fingers??
Flat Irons
06/14/2009 07:01:58 PM
Flat Irons
by Soul

Comment by bob350:
Reminds me of places in Colorado. Interesting to have the flat/angular rock forms slightly echoed in cloud shapes.
Audi: Colorado
06/07/2009 04:07:35 PM
Audi: Colorado
by Soul

Comment by salmiakki:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Looking at the comments below, I see that you have not marked some as helpful. That is very interesting because instead of the normal one or two words, at least two of those comments are extremely helpful as they are explaining to you why you like only scored a 5.00. I am likely to repeat most of what they said in my critique.

The composition is good, you have the car driving into the frame which works well. The choice to use a sort of letterbox crop is interesting and I'm not 100% sure that this works that well. I think I would prefer to see a little more vertical height above the roof of the car.

The focus seems a bit off, the rocks to the right of the frame are sharp but the car is not that sharp (it doesn't really look like motion blur). Also, the image feels a bit flat with regard to the lighting. A boost in levels would likely have helped a bit here, as it seems a bit underexposed.
As this was an advanced editing challenge, you could have selected the car and adjusted the levels (midtones) specifically for the car and then inverted the selection and boosted the rest of the image (highlights). I feel sure this would have helped.

As this was a automobile ad, I think you would have really helped your score by adding some text/graphics to the image. Most of the higher scoring images had texts added.

I was surprised this didn't score higher. It is a good image that could benefit from a bit more advanced editing. Hopefully you understand a bit better now why it only scored a 5.00.
Bird Watcher
06/07/2009 04:33:30 AM
Bird Watcher
by Soul

Comment by Melethia:
Neat - bird's view of the bird watcher.
Bird Watcher
06/06/2009 10:06:26 AM
Bird Watcher
by Soul

Comment by hotpasta:
the branch provides nice framing...good vantage point from a bird's eye view
Bird Watcher
06/04/2009 11:37:50 PM
Bird Watcher
by Soul

Comment by digifotojo:
Nicely done. 7
Bird Watcher
06/02/2009 10:42:36 PM
Bird Watcher
by Soul

Comment by Citadel:
ooooh! Really cool angle. Very creative!
Bird Watcher
06/02/2009 10:04:39 PM
Bird Watcher
by Soul

Comment by Ja-9:
ok, honest opinion....not well composed...your colors and tones are good..but your subject lacks in interest...it just doesn't make me stop and say "wow"...nothing personal
Bird Watcher
06/02/2009 02:54:17 AM
Bird Watcher
by Soul

Comment by Emerkaza:
From this point of view it looks like a bird is watching her! Nice shot!
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