Tragedy
by ytshuva

Comment by kelvinyam:
Beautifully set up. However I can't link this to transparency.

Tragedy
by ytshuva

Comment by aliqui:
That certainly is a tragedy. I fail to see the Transparency though.

05:45am sunrise
by ytshuva

Comment by salmiakki:
Greetings from the Critique Club

I think the score you received is probably around about right for this shot. This is indeed a beautiful sunrise, however, there are a number of things that could have improved the score quite easily.

The extreme shadows in the foreground do actually hurt this one a little bit. If the foreground was slightly lighter the viewer would be able to put the excellent leading line more into context. Right now it looks a little out of place.

Composition: if you had perhaps taken a few steps to the right so the subject was more to the left of the frame you could have made better use of the leading line. Also, to my eye the horizon looks like it is right in the middle of the photo. I think including a little bit more of the sky may have helped this.

Overall a very nice sunrise photo that potentially could have scored a little higher with some additional editing.

Sarah

you'll get your share at the end of the day.
by ytshuva

Comment by Rainbow-Coloured-Soul:
Good set up. Good shot. Not sure the before and after message is clear enough in terms of fitting with your title.

05:45am sunrise
by ytshuva

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
Is this a trailer, or a mushroom with a door?

05:45am sunrise
by ytshuva

Comment by Blackbox:
Quote: '"sun-rise" – noun: The daily first appearance of the sun above the eastern horizon.' Maybe it's above but behind that thing? Very beautiful colors.

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Comment by pffree:
Not of relavence to this challenge as it's basic editing, but I bet it would make a great HDR. A tweak on the angle to improve for the rule of thirds would improve the image I think.

05:45am sunrise
by ytshuva

Comment by Connor:
love the house and the sun coming from the other side, nice one 6

05:45am sunrise
by ytshuva

Comment by spiritualspatula:
I really like all the colors, and the use of the pipe leading towards the sunset is a nice touch. I would've liked a bit wider swatch illuminated on the center, but the isolation is kinda cool too.

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Comment by rmezzo:
I'm not sure what you are trying to say here. Is this prostitution, and if so, I'm not seeing how this fits with "before and after". Maybe I'm totally missing it.