Dorian Gray
by ytshuva

Comment by byinnerhero:
Very clever! Congrats!

bar
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Comment by Ammie:
Beautiful kid and picture but to fit the challenge the bars should have been in focus, not the beautiful young lady.

bar
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Comment by ASTONishing:
I think I would have choosen to focus on the lines and left the girl OOF.

maria
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Comment by JulietNN:
Hi from the Critique Club

You asked for this shot to have a comment from a member of the Critique Club.

I really liked this shot and gave it high score in the challenge

This reeks of 1940-50's with the lipstick, very simple and clean.

There is not a lot I can say that could improve this shot, maybe, just maybe saturating the eyes and a tiny bit of dodge and burn before turning this to black and white would have given the eyes some more depth.

But this is a fabulous shot

maria
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Comment by tnun:
Love the unspoiled classic feel to this.

maria
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Comment by bucket:
wow this is beautiful...classic!

maria
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Comment by heida:
its very pretty, reminds my of like old time movie star I wonder if you are telling her something or she is seeing something cause it looks like the mouth is in the middle of going from no smiling to smiling or maybe even a little shyness there

maria
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Comment by skewsme:
if Heida were in here, i would not be surprised if she entered this. i don't quite know why. somehow it seems to fit the arc of her work.
great tones and it looks like a movie still.

maria
by ytshuva

Comment by colorcarnival:
Love the pose and the light on her face. 7

maria
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Comment by Melethia:
Incredibly compelling and very timeless.