Kimmel at Night III
by banmorn

Comment by Azrifel:
Repetition and the diagonal flow of the red lines works well here, the background framework adds depth. Good.

Kimmel at Night III
by banmorn

Comment by hideout:
Nice abstract design. The oranges and pale yellows are wonderful, wish the sky had a bit more blue twilite to compliment.

Golden Iris
by banmorn

Comment by talikf:
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Golden Iris
by banmorn

Comment by sherpet:
Beautiful.....

Heater Off the Left Corner
by banmorn

Comment by yanko:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First off let me tell you I love baseball so right off the bat you have me especially since this image is so vivid in color and is super sharp! But I must find faults especially since you scored only a 5.02 which I think makes this terribly underrated, IMO.

Ok, the aspect of heat in this challenge was probably in dispute by many voters or they simply didn't understand the sports reference. In any case to help with the idea here I think you should have used a slightly slower shutter speed so you get more motion blur on the ball to convey speed. Also, like one of the commenters mentioned a swinging bat would have helped greatly. Assuming you were there for the whole game you probably could have caught an image like that. Speaking of which if you combine more motion blur and a swinging bat you would have achieved your goal of capturing that baseball heater to the max. Another good shot of this could have been a pitch inside where the hitter leans back. Obviously that's a tougher one to capture since you'd probably have to be shooting on just about every pitch to get the one like that. Anyway, just a thought.

Golden Iris
by banmorn

Comment by nodster:
interesting

Kimmel at Night III
by banmorn

Comment by Balko:
Using a new formula....
Meets the Challenge = 2
Technical Merit = 2
Holds Interest = 1
Creativity = 1
The "wow factor" = 0
Final score: 6

Kimmel at Night III
by banmorn

Comment by Rikki:
Hello Robert. The Kimmel Center by famed architect Rafael Vinoly ;) This image truly creates dynamic characteristics due to the curves against the horizontals within the space ;) I think the sky color could have been saturated slightly so as not to appear too gray. Great colors and a wonderful abstract to add to your images ;) Good luck!

Kimmel at Night III
by banmorn

Comment by hotpasta:
wow! stunning...excellent at night

Golden Iris
by banmorn

Comment by KarenNfld:
Very pretty, great job on the lighting.