Columns
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Comment by MacDonald:
interesting shapes/textures

Little Mother
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Comment by graphicfunk:
Great facial expression to enhance the power of this character study. Bumping up.

Window Lattice
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Comment by nereum:
One of my favorites. Very well done.

Columns
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Comment by jansku:
Nice shapes, nice lines, nice diagonal composition. However, something is missing. Sorry I can't describe it any more precisely. 8.

Window Lattice
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Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, I am Kari and am fairly new to the critique club.

This is a great image, and that is shown by your fourth placing in the patterns challenge.

Clearly from your body of work this is something that you are clearly good at and have a great eye for.

First Impression - the most important one:
This picture is balanced and is just amazing ... how the hell did he create it.

Composition:
To my eye couldn't really be improved a hell of a lot.

Subject:
Patterns and this definately met that subject extremely well.

Technical (Colour and light):
Nice lighting ... I would love to see the orginal to see how your post editing worked to improve the picture - as this is a good piece of work.

To grow its vote?:
The difference between first and forth is .5 ... perhaps shooting those who gave you 1s would help, but they will have had their reasons ... but that is about all.

Summary:
Fantastic shot, well in your genre ... and you have done well - again.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Congratulations and well done.

Kari

Little Mother
by banmorn

Comment by twm122:
Very pretty mommy in her pink.

wavelength
by banmorn

Comment by SDW:
From the Critique Club

I think you did a great job on this photograph. The lights are out of focus intentionally and it was successful. You photograph is very clean, meaning that the background is nice and smooth behind your subject. I feel the exposure to be good and the colors to be great adding a 'wow' factor to the photograph.

You image IMO is balanced to a degree but could of been a little more aliened to show a wave length. I believe even with the balance issue your visual elements are effective and show a strong interest, pattern, and design. I give you props on a simple yet complete without distracting elements in your photograph.

I find your photograph to keep my attention, again showing some 'wow' factor. It also is creative and you used an unusual subject in an effective way.

Great job and continue the good work. IMO if the wave lengths would of been more fluent than random I feel your score would of surpassed the 6 mark.
-SDW

Little Mother
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Comment by DrAchoo:
Looks a little cool (in tone, not temperature). I like color portraits to be warm. Makes the person look more alive.

Columns
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Comment by lucas:
reminds me of when i lived in indonesia. the black and white dosent suit this well though. if there were some powerfull colors there it would be better. 8

Columns
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Comment by Shutterbug21:
Beautiful!