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Comment by Gotcha:
Pablo Picasso in training no doubt. I hope you continue to encourage this sort of training, you could possible retire early. This is Childhood, without question. I like the diagonals and the framing. The lighting is a little dark and/or contrasty for my tastes, but the overall look of this has an artsy feel. Good Luck - Gotcha

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Comment by KarenB:
I think this would be more effective in horizontal with the eye leading down the wall and into the hallway a bit (or room?). A bit too dark. Good idea, and definately describes childhood.

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Comment by HBunch:
I wish we could see this better! I really like the idea behind this. Definately portrays childhood nicely. I would say that I wish it were brighter, but I think that if it were brighter, it would be even harder to see. I like the angle on this very much. Great job and good luck in the challenge.

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Comment by mcrael:
Give that kid some paper! My mother would have shot me for this. Angle and lighting makes this an interesting shot.

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Comment by floyd:
Good choice of subject - I almost did grafitti myself. Overall the shot it very dark but I like the doorframe in shot. - floyd

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Comment by Jak:
The lighting and angle are awful. I suspect there was an intersting shot to be had here. 2 Jak

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Comment by ragde_77:
I liked the idea, but may be you can find a better angle because the door is very distracting.

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Comment by chilibonze:
perhaps if you emphasized the scribbling to be low to the ground as a child would have it. it seems too high up

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Comment by waltoml:
Nice idea. Unfortunatly for me, I have seen this in my own home. Focus looks good. The lighting seems a bit dark on the subject.

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Comment by myqyl:
hehehe, Been there, done that... I like the strong linesof the door jam and the molding... The lighting bothered me at first, but it's grown on me...