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| 08/30/2009 09:29:00 PM |
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| 08/30/2009 08:30:07 AM |
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| 08/24/2009 04:38:17 PM |
Egg with a Side of Ribbonby LadyKComment by Budya: Greetings from the Critique Club!
First Impression: You really must love eggs! :) This is a really fun and a very original photo (and sounds like you had fun setting it up as well!).
Technicals/Processing: Although the composition is good, having the pan straight on (like your inspiration) or a tighter crop would have strengthened your composition significantly. I am not a big fan of your background, its texture and pattern seems to compete with the omelet. While your focus for the most parts is good, I really wish the focus was sharp throughout -- the slightly out of focus handle knobs and lower right of the omelet are a little distracting. I think a final pass of sharpening would have helped to bring out some texture in the omelet. The lightning on the top left of the pan is a little strong.
Final thoughts: Unfortunately, I think, your choice of background costed you a few points, as technical shortfalls are fairly minor. This is a fun and very original image and, as Jutildasaid, you really can't go wrong with Calphalon!
Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions.
Cheers,
Anna |
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| 08/24/2009 12:46:55 PM |
Egg with a Side of Ribbonby LadyKComment by AmeedEl-Ghoul: This is among the underrated pictures in the challenge ..
for (&&^()** sake how someone can rate this 2 and 3 ..
Well .. If I voted at this challenge, I would've gaven it 8-10 ..
very well done and keep up , |
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| 08/24/2009 10:10:08 AM |
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| 08/23/2009 01:07:03 AM |
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| 08/22/2009 03:00:51 PM |
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| 08/19/2009 04:45:00 PM |
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| 08/19/2009 12:45:49 PM |
Blondieby LadyKComment by JuliBoc: I love the color of the wood. I think it would benefit from having the right side cropped a bit, removing the distracting light at the side of the building, and bringing the subject more off-center. Her outfit overpowers the blond hair, and I\'m suspecting that may have effected the score. I like the mystery of this shot: Why is she dressed like that in that location? Why is she leaning like that against the wall? What is on her mind? |
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