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08/24/2009 04:38:17 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
First Impression: You really must love eggs! :) This is a really fun and a very original photo (and sounds like you had fun setting it up as well!).
Technicals/Processing: Although the composition is good, having the pan straight on (like your inspiration) or a tighter crop would have strengthened your composition significantly. I am not a big fan of your background, its texture and pattern seems to compete with the omelet. While your focus for the most parts is good, I really wish the focus was sharp throughout -- the slightly out of focus handle knobs and lower right of the omelet are a little distracting. I think a final pass of sharpening would have helped to bring out some texture in the omelet. The lightning on the top left of the pan is a little strong.
Final thoughts: Unfortunately, I think, your choice of background costed you a few points, as technical shortfalls are fairly minor. This is a fun and very original image and, as  Jutildasaid, you really can't go wrong with Calphalon!
Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions.
Cheers,
Anna |
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08/24/2009 12:46:55 PM |
This is among the underrated pictures in the challenge ..
for (&&^()** sake how someone can rate this 2 and 3 ..
Well .. If I voted at this challenge, I would've gaven it 8-10 ..
very well done and keep up , |
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08/24/2009 10:10:08 AM |
| It looks like you had fun putting this together, and glad that no hens were hurt in doing this :-) |
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08/23/2009 01:07:03 AM |
| very cool....great idea, love this |
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08/22/2009 03:00:51 PM |
| Very, very nice. One of my favorites. |
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08/19/2009 04:45:00 PM |
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08/18/2009 08:05:45 PM |
| Looks like IreneMs breakfast... I guess thats the secret eh. |
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08/17/2009 03:44:38 PM |
| Seriously excellent, even after voting the whole challenge! |
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08/17/2009 02:35:19 PM |
| You just can't go wrong with Calphalon. This is clever. I like the graphics. |
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08/17/2009 01:31:30 PM |
| very creative! great color.....nice comp |
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08/17/2009 01:00:37 PM |
| Very creative! I like the colors and contrast. =) 8 |
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08/17/2009 01:18:19 AM |
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08/17/2009 01:15:05 AM |
If you hadn't told me with the title, it may have taken me a while to figure out exactly what this is!
Nice idea, and I like the black on yellow. Those eggs seem almost luminous in appearance! Don't know that the stripy background helps at all though. |
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