Picture #1
by sillygoat

Comment by wehrmacher:
Nice work Jackie. She tended to have unnatural are positions, but I think that the straight on view of her arm minimized the awkward position. You did a great job with her and Brice(? Sorry, can't recall the name.)

In any event, I love your postings.

Bill

Picture #4
by sillygoat

Comment by justamistere:
Among the ones you've posted here, the colors of clothing an skin tones look the sharpest in this one most

Picture #5
by sillygoat

Comment by jhomrighaus:
The guy definitely doesn't work here, She looks pretty good.

Picture #4
by sillygoat

Comment by yanko:
She really has a strong presence in this shot. Very confident. Although his body feels a little stiff I like his expression better in this one even though it's very similar to the other shot. Probably has to do with the direction he's looking. It just has a bolder feel to it.

Edited for clarity.

Message edited by author 2008-07-31 03:43:50.

Picture #5
by sillygoat

Comment by yanko:
I like her expression. It's doesn't look fake. However, I'm a bit let down by the guy's expression though. I think it's because he isn't looking at the camera or at her so it makes him look disinterested.

Workshop
by sillygoat

Comment by photokariangel:
i really like the lighting, but for some reason her arm looks a little off to me, maybe because it was at an inteeresting angle. other then that, i really like it, good job!

Workshop
by sillygoat

Comment by yanko:
Very good shot! I like the lighting and their expressions are good. What bothers me a little is the hand/arm placement on the left side of the photo. For some reason I don't like that her arm is straight on with the camera. It makes it look too uncomfortable/contorted in a way. Also, the guy's hand resting on the wall pulls my eyes in that direction after my eyes leave her face. I don't think you want my eyes going in that direction and leaving the frame. If she wasn't there his pose would look better so I'd be tempted to clone out that arm. Just a thought.

Workshop
by sillygoat

Comment by justamistere:
You silly goat! You make em smile. Upload more.