Day 1
by Maggye

Comment by tnun:
Very pleasing en passant. Nice light and colour. I do think if you cropped out the woman behind (might have to dodge out the edge of her blue sweater) you would have a simply beautiful composition.

Day 1
by Maggye

Comment by bvy:
The lighting here is beautiful and her expression is mysterious. I think her hands help tell the story. I love the warm tones. Well captured!

Day 1
by Maggye

Comment by crik:
The focus and light are right on. The color tones of the clothes
add to the soft and warm feeling here. But her anxious expression is
what captures my eye and makes me wonder why.

Day 1
by Maggye

Comment by bassbone:
the uncertain look is quite well captured - i just wish there were a bit more context to the image - such as a bit of a different perspective to either have the woman in the background more of a subject or out all togetehr

Day 1
by Maggye

Comment by MacDonald:
I like the light in this shot - the shadows add much to the overall effect. I agree that the woman in the b/g is a distraction.

Day 1
by Maggye

Comment by citymars:
Very attractive capture, with lovely slanted lighting. The body language of the subject is quite appealing. The skirt really makes the photo for some reason, I like the color and you've captured the movement nicely. On the nitpick side, the woman in the background is a distraction (to me), and the overhead awning, though oof, nevertheless intrudes a bit as well.

Day 1
by Maggye

Comment by Ann:
Very nice. Good job getting a lit subject against the shaded background. It makes the subject stand out nicely. The one thing that's missing is a sense of who she is or what she's doing. Not sure how you'd accomplish that with this subject.

Day 1
by Maggye

Comment by salmiakki:
As others have said before, the light here is lovely.

Day 1
by Maggye

Comment by shalrath:
Very nice, I think I would like to see a little more emphasis placed on the 'younger/older' element in this image, perhaps if you'd moved a step or two to the left to place these two opposing elements better in the frame. Otherwise, a pleasing image! Great start!

Day 1
by Maggye

Comment by pawdrix:
There are some nice elemenst to the shot. I myself, am trying to capture something that's more of a window to let the viewer see something deeper about the subjects. My first enrty is almost there but not quite.