Mental Osmosis
by got2bgutsy

Comment by violinist123:
Nice idea, but the photo itself really needs work. Pulling the subject away from the wall (and probably figuring out some other way to keep that stack of books on her head) would get rid of the shadows. Also the focus here is off. Smaller aperture, get everything from the cover of the book she is reading back to her face in focus.

Mental Osmosis
by got2bgutsy

Comment by JLC:
Cute idea.

Mental Osmosis
by got2bgutsy

Comment by nati_in_here:
a little blurry

Mental Osmosis
by got2bgutsy

Comment by kaelacusack:
Cute concept, the image could be better (lighting, quality, etc.)

Mental Osmosis
by got2bgutsy

Comment by quiche:
Work on white balance. Skin is too orange. A bit more lighting on her face would help change this from a snapshot to a portrait.

Mental Osmosis
by got2bgutsy

Comment by h2:
Technicals: 0.5/2 - soft focus; wrong white balance: orange cast; jpeg-artifacting; noise

Composition: 0/2 - centered composition; plain POV; bad crop at bottom; uneven lighting;

Challenge Relation: 2/2

Originality/Creativity: 1.5/2

Overall Impact: 0.5/2

5 (challenge relation overweighted)

Mental Osmosis
by got2bgutsy

Comment by HannahBanana11:
great idea!

Mental Osmosis
by got2bgutsy

Comment by ccasey:
cute idea--colors are off and not enough light

Mental Osmosis
by got2bgutsy

Comment by lambie83:
Cute idea. Too bad there's so much noise in the image.

Mental Osmosis
by got2bgutsy

Comment by karmat:
is that really a book?? intersting shot. focus seems a bit off -- perhaps artifacted from resizing?