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11/27/2007 12:41:27 PM |
| This is a great idea that has been executed well. However, the soft focus and flash glare on the book are difficult to overlook. |
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11/26/2007 06:28:03 PM |
| Interesting image. I like the intelligence/feeling concept presented here, Highlight on Birdsong book is quite distracting. |
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11/26/2007 09:08:22 AM |
| Great idea, but the quality lacks, 6. |
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11/25/2007 06:55:52 PM |
| It's diffusion, not osmosis. |
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11/25/2007 10:40:03 AM |
| Nice idea, but the photo itself really needs work. Pulling the subject away from the wall (and probably figuring out some other way to keep that stack of books on her head) would get rid of the shadows. Also the focus here is off. Smaller aperture, get everything from the cover of the book she is reading back to her face in focus. |
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11/24/2007 10:14:47 PM |
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11/24/2007 08:56:41 PM |
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11/24/2007 12:20:05 AM |
| Cute concept, the image could be better (lighting, quality, etc.) |
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11/23/2007 10:00:27 PM |
| Work on white balance. Skin is too orange. A bit more lighting on her face would help change this from a snapshot to a portrait. |
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11/22/2007 09:36:34 AM |
Technicals: 0.5/2 - soft focus; wrong white balance: orange cast; jpeg-artifacting; noise
Composition: 0/2 - centered composition; plain POV; bad crop at bottom; uneven lighting;
Challenge Relation: 2/2
Originality/Creativity: 1.5/2
Overall Impact: 0.5/2
5 (challenge relation overweighted) |
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11/22/2007 09:34:16 AM |
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11/21/2007 07:00:32 PM |
| cute idea--colors are off and not enough light |
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11/21/2007 06:02:05 PM |
| Cute idea. Too bad there's so much noise in the image. |
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11/21/2007 02:29:08 PM |
| is that really a book?? intersting shot. focus seems a bit off -- perhaps artifacted from resizing? |
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11/21/2007 11:28:15 AM |
| no ressolution... just a snapshot... poor quality |
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11/21/2007 11:22:49 AM |
| Good idea...but not sharp or well lit, and bit noisy. |
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11/21/2007 09:04:38 AM |
| Too bad for the shadows and lack of sharpness. Cute image though. |
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11/21/2007 05:24:42 AM |
| very cute idea - her facial expression is great and the apple on top is a nice touch - but techicals - white balance, noise levels, and pixelation could really use some adjustments |
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11/21/2007 01:00:27 AM |
| Very grainy and soft on the focus... |
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11/21/2007 12:31:37 AM |
| I think your ISO is too high, looks grainy to me. Funny title of the book. |
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