Time Keeps on Slipping, Slipping, Slipping
by karmat

Comment by the general:
very interesting

Time Keeps on Slipping, Slipping, Slipping
by karmat

Comment by wewillexplore:
Awesome.

Time Keeps on Slipping, Slipping, Slipping
by karmat

Comment by schurg:
at first I was kinda "blaw" but then I noticed the consistant decrease/increase of the sand as it goes down, it makes a really cool tapering pattern if you look at it as a whole design rather then repeating shapes, I like it.

From Scratch
by karmat

Comment by Silver Fox:
From Scratch
by karmat
Critique by Silver Fox

Your photograph is just smack full of equipment for making this cake and keeps one busy looking around the kitchen area which is okay, because that̢۪s what I like to do when I watch my wife or daughter baking.

I really like your sepia tone; it gives off a better photo compared to a black and white alone.

Exposure and focus are good as is the lighting, though it is a bit bright in the back over top of the bowl area.

I like the way you have the spoons and the eggs cut off at the bottom, it brings my eyes up over the recipe book, around the area and back down to the bowls and the spoons again.

I think you did a good job in the Kitchen Challenge, finishing in 17th place out of 79. Congratulations!

Look forward to seeing more of your work in the weeks to come.

Regards,
Ed

Time Keeps on Slipping, Slipping, Slipping
by karmat

Comment by lbWhaples:
This would have been a good one for the Song Titles challenge :-)

From Scratch
by karmat

Comment by mcmurma:
I like the tone here a lot. But the wonky view leaves me a bit disoriented! Still, this is a very nicely done photo.

From Scratch
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Comment by alanfreed:
Looks like it came right out of a cook book -- this looks like something that has a lot of potential as a print! Great toning, and the angle adds a lot of interest to the shot.

From Scratch
by karmat

Comment by aussie:
I love the angle in which you chose to take this photo. An excellent idea for the challenge. The colour gives it an old feeling. Lovely photo and GL.

From Scratch
by karmat

Comment by Silver Fox:
Everything here looks just fine, your lighting is great, coloring looks fine, I like the whites of your eggs, and your border is great, but your angle of the photo just doesn't appeal to me. Just my taste though, nothing wrong with your photo, that's just me.

From Scratch
by karmat

Comment by inspzil:
I like the radical angle and the color approach. The background is a little busy but not too bad. Nice job