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| 06/04/2003 06:26:53 PM |
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| 06/04/2003 01:07:03 PM |
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| 06/04/2003 12:39:56 PM |
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| 05/27/2003 11:59:13 PM |
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| 05/27/2003 01:55:20 PM |
Helpby AlexanderComment by MattW: nice idea..i don't think you should have taken this picture on top of blue wood..kind of random |
| 05/25/2003 10:37:09 PM |
Colour Pencilsby AlexanderComment by timj351: Critique Club critique by Tim Jensen.
This is a pretty interesting photo and there are many things that I like about it. The first thing that jumped out at me was the nice vivid colors of the brushes plus the textured background. I also enjoy the simple but effective composition. Unfortunately your use of lighting has caused the brush ends to get lost among the background. This could be helped by aiming your light source at the brush ends to highlight that part and if you were to lower your light you could also create some nice shadows that would add even more interest. Always try to remember to experiment a lot with the positioning of your lights. One reason is that they can photograph much different than you see with your eyes alone.
This meets the challenge very well and you clearly executed it very well by keeping it sharp and clean. The border looks good although I think instead of the light blue to match the color in the background I would have chosen the green color that is on the brush. This links the border to the main subject and not the secondary element.
All in all this is a pretty solid photo. Now, about that title....
Tim |
| 05/21/2003 10:24:00 AM |
Helpby AlexanderComment by 'Pong: The idea is quite alright but maybe you want to try different background and lighting. |
| 05/21/2003 01:19:54 AM |
Helpby AlexanderComment by pncowley: I'm beginning to feel like I don't know enough about the Matrix to judge. But I can say that the word NOKIA staring at you does make it kind of hard to get swept away into the photograph. I LOVE your background. I think if you would have lost the phone, it still would have been an interesting shot (it's still complex even though everyone knows it's a motherboard). You have great focus and lighting in this shot. Good job. -7 |
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| 05/20/2003 11:57:58 PM |
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