Hawaiian summer
by MrAkamai

Comment by scrum8:
I would have cropped out the guy with the boogie board and tried to center on the water spray.

Hawaiian petroglyph
by MrAkamai

Comment by ttreit:
I like the subject but the lighting is dull and makes this shot lifeless. Perhaps taking it at a differnt time of day would have helped?

Hawaiian petroglyph
by MrAkamai

Comment by HBunch:
To be perfectly honest, this isn't the most exciting shot I've seen. Not really much to grab my attention. I think that in person it might have some effect, but as a photo, it just doesn't grab me. However, I think that you did a nice job of taking this photo. The lighting is good, no bright spots or distracting dark areas. Focus appears to be just fine, and actually I think that the crack is a little more interesting than the drawing its self. I might have prefered if the subject were off center a bit and not so centered.

Hawaiian summer
by MrAkamai

Comment by WildflowerJoy:
I think this could be cropped a bit to lead the eye to the heart of the photo.

Hawaiian summer
by MrAkamai

Comment by crichard:
Neat!

Hawaiian summer
by MrAkamai

Comment by xhoss:
crop out the pic to just include the center kid - and I would have given you a higher score. very cool pic nonetheless. nice job.