Burning Out
by chris48083

Comment by bennettjamie:
Awesome shot. I wish the yellow truck and the guy was not in the bg, as it is a little distracting.This is a little grainy but considering the ISO used, I see why now.

IMGP5770.jpg
by chris48083

Comment by bennettjamie:
This is pretty cool. Is he mirrored, or is that someone else in the bg? Love the colors/.

Night
by chris48083

Comment by bennettjamie:
I think this is a very fantastic photo. I love the diagnal lines leading to the road, and the sunset is great.

Home
by chris48083

Comment by bennettjamie:
For me, this photo is uninteresting. There is no subject. Not sure what to look at. Also, the colors seem a little flat, maybe a little more contrast?

Home II
by chris48083

Comment by bennettjamie:
This is a really nice photo and works well with B&W here. I love that you can see a hint of the pond that gives you a reflection. I love the diagnals here and perspective. Great work!

Week 4
by chris48083

Comment by RedDotCom:
Cool idea! I agree a lighter background may help out and a focused 'Redo' would be nice. Perfect example of when to use your DoF preview - if your camera has one. Love the idea though, this would look great if the keys were a Valentine's Red!

Week 4
by chris48083

Comment by CapeSail:
Interesting photo, the background takes away from it, maybe completely dark with just the keys lit...I think that would accentuate the message as well.

Playing by the River
by chris48083

Comment by jpochard:
I scored this one a "4" during the challenge. The colors are off, which is the first thing people seem to be noticing. The little girl also seems a little out of focus to me, which is probably from the slow shutter speed. I would think on an outside shot, you should be able to work with a little higher shutter...at least a 1/60 would probably have made a difference here.

You might also consider cropping some off of the top, as I think it would bring the viewer's attention more to the subject. Hope this is helpful!

A Day in These Shoes
by chris48083

Comment by jpochard:
I agree with most comments below. It appears out of focus and the black border is distracting and not adding to the shot. However, I do like the idea and the shoes have "character" (you can tell I'm a Realtor) I like the composition as well...just the technical end of the shot needs some work. I'm not a fan of the really red tone, but that's a matter of taste I suppose.

Week 4
by chris48083

Comment by jdannels:
you gave this a good treatment into black and white. It has good strong whites and blacks. A simple message delivered effectively.