Losing my marblesby
friscaComment by wewillexplore: Greetings from the Critique Club
Hello Pam, nice to meet you! *rofl*
Composition
I like that the composition is spilling into and not out of the page. So often these little things get ignored. I like that the spillage looks like grapes - only hanging the wrong way in this case - still cool. :) Also - you cut off the end of the glass. Intent or space?
Color
Red tint makes this elegant - so does the ribbon. Your marbles don't lend much in colors, but they do contrast with your bg.
Focus
A bit soft, but I don't think that's a problem. I disagree that it's tack sharp, but that's just me.
Lighting
Beautiful, perfect lighting all except the base of the glass where it meets the neck. Hard to eliminate though.
Subject matter
Glass, glass, all around, but not a drop to drink (from). I like the marbles spilling, instead of some liquid - it gives the feel of something out of the ordinary. It's very nice!
Overall
You shot this on your bed? Why wasn't I there?
You SHOULD be proud of this shot (and the 5.5 score isn't indicative of this shot).
Matt