BW film developer
by birgir

Comment by Jutilda:
Greetings from the Critique Club@@@

First of all, let me congratulate you on your originality and imaginative take on the challenge. I think the white skin with the black film wrapped around certainly suits the challenge. The natural wrapped in the man-made even creates the contrast on a 2nd level. The composition is great. The shadowing under the body adds to the contrast. The curl of the film adds a fun nuance to the overall abstract sense of the shot.

My main critique would be that the image is just too small. You could have 640 as your largest pixelation and could make it up to 150 kb as well, so it would make for a much crisper, impactful image.

I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future! Judy

Girl in love
by birgir

Comment by asij:
�slensk? Nice idea and good framing... First i thought it was a littel bit cliche but the more i look at it, the more i like it...

Girl in love
by birgir

Comment by davmct:
she doesn't really look like she's in love other than the background image. expression screams "i'm bored of this already". :( alot of potential, but need to keep the subject w/the mood you're trying to capture.

Girl in love
by birgir

Comment by kevrobertson:
Works for me.
Great image, focus, composition and back drop.
Good luck

Kev

Girl in love
by birgir

Comment by DrAchoo:
The colors work fairly well. I like the natural look. 7

Girl in love
by birgir

Comment by mexico:
Great picture! She has lovely eyes and hair and just that hint of a smile. Good background, too.

Girl in love
by birgir

Comment by TheStick:
Well composed! Great job!

Girl in love
by birgir

Comment by loseme:
Nice shot, the background makes the eyes just pop.

Girl in love
by birgir

Comment by Elaine:
Her face blends into the background. First I see the heart then her shirt, then I start looking for her face. In a portrait, I think the first thing I see should be the face.

Girl in love
by birgir

Comment by tjbel05:
Nice colors, good backround. Pretty eyes