Girls just wanna have fun
by hojop25

Comment by manavg:
not strong enough subject for me. 4

Girls just wanna have fun
by hojop25

Comment by Aarthek:
Very fun, good eyes, light balance.. well done.

Girls just wanna have fun
by hojop25

Comment by Abra:
Cheeky! Good capture of the eyes. Not trying to pop a pimple I hope ;-)

Edit of mechanics of time
by hojop25

Comment by Senay:
This one is pretty great too, it's a tough choice between the two. I like the processing on this one more but I'm not sure how I feel about the blur on everything around the watch.

Mechanics of time
by hojop25

Comment by Senay:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

This was one of my favourites of the challenge. Also I noticed Carlsberg fairly quickly, I love that stuff haha. This would look perfectly natural as an ad in a magazine. Centering the watch was perfect, title works amazingly well with how you set this up.

At first I agreed with the commenter who suggested a square crop, but thinking of this appearing in a magazine the crop would have to be more like this so it works better this way. I guess it all just depends on how you see it being advertised.

I think I like this one better than your outtake but if you had the colours/contrast of that one in this picture it might have given you a higher score. Overall great work! And you're only 16 so even more awesome! I hope I get to see more of your work show up.

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Senay

Rising sun (CW)
by hojop25

Comment by dtremain:
IMO this is a bit OOF (with possible exception of the clear bubble). There also seems to be a grainy texture to the orange ripples. Not a bad shot, just missing something - needs a bit of extra pop of some kind.

Time to go
by hojop25

Comment by e10icus:
Strong statement.I can feel tension in this one.

Time to go
by hojop25

Comment by FrankRobinson:
For some reason I keep visualising James Dean's head on this. Good composition, lighting and 'feel'

Rising sun (CW)
by hojop25

Comment by v5planet:
I'm not voting in this challenge, but if I were I'd give this a 10. It's simple and elegant, and has an appealing tonal range within the orange and yellow spectrum. I like the softness of the ripples...

Rising sun (CW)
by hojop25

Comment by KristinaG:
Serene and beautiful. I love this picture most for its simplicity.