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| 09/14/2007 12:07:50 PM |
Glowby pixel_expressComment by violinist123: Critique Club feedback:
This is an eye catching abstract with pleasing shapes and tones throughout the image.
Two things likely kept this shot from scoring higher. First, even sharpness throughout the shot would present all those wonderful patterns to the viewer in crisp detail. Second, the composition itself is rather haphazard. If this is a crop out of a larger shot, it may be worth experimenting to see where placing the 'focal point' (the blue bit) gives the image the most impact. In my mind I see that spot as being the upper right of the image so that the shapes and colors all point/fade down to the lower left.
Abstracts are not often appealing to DPC voters, and tend to get a love/hate response. The fact that this pulled a strong middle-of-the-road score should be taken as encouraging in my experience. |
| 09/04/2007 02:39:37 PM |
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| 09/02/2007 08:32:41 AM |
Glowby pixel_expressComment by SaraR: Certainly an unusual take on flower photography! I can't work out whether I like it or not - I think perhaps I would prefer a more gradual move from blue to the purply brown. |
| 08/04/2007 12:48:01 PM |
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| 08/03/2007 01:04:54 AM |
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| 08/02/2007 07:55:05 AM |
How Sweet it isby pixel_expressComment by Caravela: backrounds a little distracting which is exacerbated by too many highlights and shadows in the petals. Try to shoot on overcast days and begin to use light reflectors (tin foil is a cheap alternative!) to avoid blown out highlights and shadows which lack detail. Also, watch your dof and shoot towards a backround that doesn't lead the eye away from your main area of interest. hope that helps. |
| 07/05/2007 02:57:44 PM |
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| 07/05/2007 08:51:53 AM |
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| 06/28/2007 01:40:20 PM |
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