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| 07/29/2004 09:31:34 PM |
On the Window Sillby adineComment by KiwiChris: A classic still-life..
The range of tones is great, and the choice of colour / grey objects is also neat..
The only distracting thing (and this is picky) is that you've picked up some barrel distortion in this shot, as you've obviously shot it with a wide angle lense? The line of the sill along the 'bottom' is curved upwards at the ends, and the top edge is curged downwards at the ends. In a perfect abstract still life world it'd be nice if they were parallel.
If you're using a zoom lense going to the middle of the range will often give the least distortion, or picking a prime lense in in the 60-100mm range if you're using an SLR.
I'd also have liked to see a bit more separation in tone/colour between the top of the image (floor?) and the sill, maybe a solid coloured rug, or a bit of coloured art paper on the floor. |
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| 07/29/2004 06:43:41 PM |
On the Window Sillby adineComment by jmsetzler: There is much beauty in simplicity. I like this image quite a bit. The negative space at the bottom is something I can't really determine how much I like. I can't seem to put a value on its purpose other than balancing the composition to a centered view across the horizontal. The image seems to wlrk well with that part cut out also. Either way, I like it.... very nice work :) |
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| 07/28/2004 11:25:30 PM |
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| 07/28/2004 07:18:00 PM |
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| 07/28/2004 10:28:00 AM |
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| 07/28/2004 03:51:31 AM |
Choicesby adineComment by Patoch: So weldone and ... so chocolate ! One of my favorite <8> |
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| 07/28/2004 12:46:42 AM |
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| 07/28/2004 12:20:18 AM |
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| 07/27/2004 11:49:42 PM |
Choicesby adineComment by Donald: Now this is what the martian landscape should look like. I love the composition movement between size and texture. It remains subtle to me that someone took a bite from the chocolat bar as the empty space reveils more points of interest. What is realy hiding under that bar anyways? Yes I am too curious. |
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| 07/27/2004 11:02:55 PM |
Choicesby adineComment by moodville: Good lighting, focus, and composition. Nice mix of textures too. It meets the challenge well, and I could also see it as part of an advertisement but it lacks the 'wow' for DPC. |
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