Shower View
by timboydwhite

Comment by qachyk:
I don't know... it's less your subject I have a problem with than the depth of focus, it's very distracting to have that much blur where the colour change is.

Shower View
by timboydwhite

Comment by cmrk74:
I really like abstract shots. I like this shot, but It took me a minute to tell what it is. That not necessarily a bad thing-sometimes that is what the photographer wants, is to be not so obvious. In this paticular case I think that adding another element or changing the depth of field (a little) would help.

Shower View
by timboydwhite

Comment by David Ey:
looks like a small piece of lint on the top

Flip mode
by timboydwhite

Comment by christo:
An interesting take on the challenge.
The colors really pop up from the screen as you discover the image, and I like that. ... It was important to focus on that, because the theme is "colors". You managed through your original processing to get vivid and clean colors. This image, with the processing you did, has a surreal look I really like. The fact that I can't really tell what it is makes me focus on the colors, which is the main subject here. Very well done.
However, the way you modified this image makes this entry more a digital work than a photograph. I find it difficult to judge this entry because of that. It is not a photograph anymore in my opinion. I still think it was a good move in the particular case of this theme, because the unreal look focuses on colors, but at the same time I can't stop thinking you're out of the limits of the contest. The best proof is that I can't judge of the quality of exposure here: it is totally irrelevant.
So I have very mixed feelings. I think it is a very good digital work, but not a photograph.

Good luck for your future entries!

The Critique Club

Shower View
by timboydwhite

Comment by magnus:
Great original idea! But if the DOF stretched to the top of the frame, and that lint wasn't there then it would be cleaner.

Shower View
by timboydwhite

Comment by tyrkinn:
Nice focus/DOF, clean and simple, I like it - 7

Shower View
by timboydwhite

Comment by ChrisW123:
Cool angle and focus on the top metal part. But I think the image needs darker parts. The shadows (the dark parts) should be almost completely black.

Shower View
by timboydwhite

Comment by dsidwell:
You make a common object interesting!

matrix survival kit
by timboydwhite

Comment by roleychiu:
cliche

matrix survival kit
by timboydwhite

Comment by sotsot:
Are the sun glasses and mobile phone telling us a MATRIX? sorry, I guess no..at least not to me