Headache In The Makin'
by Drake

Comment by Neuferland:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

This is a wonderful overall image, I love just about any animal shots though :)

The motion of the bird is excellent, capturing it in both positions, in and out of the food dish. Really shows the "action" of the shot.

To me the angle of the shot and the cropping seem just a bit off. Capturing birds on film is hard enough so not sure if you could have gotten another angle or not but I'm thinking more of a side view would have really made this picture pop for me. Also the cropping on the bottom seems to high, cutting his tail off hurts this shot to me and the top crop seems just a tad tight also while you could have come in just a touch more on the right.

Hope this helps!

Good Luck In Future Challenges!

Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further!

Hey... Where Is My Bone?
by Drake

Comment by ahaze:
while the point of view is somewhat interesting, this really looks to me like nothing more than a snapshot with flash, which doesn't require any effort or imagination. So many other submitters put a lot of work into their submissions, and it shows. 2.

"Moon Glow"
by Drake

Comment by peecee:
This would have been a winner but for the moon being too over exposed
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"Moon Glow"
by Drake

Comment by Dave Gordon:
A bit less exposure would have added some detail to the moon. I don't know if that would have preserved the interesting pattern of branches or not. If not, I would certainly go with your choice of a blank moon. If the exposure reduction were to add detail without spoiling the branches, I would go with it.

Hey... Where Is My Bone?
by Drake

Comment by admart01:
Not necessarily a different pov for me, the viewer. You caught a great expression (I sure know that look!)

Hey... Where Is My Bone?
by Drake

Comment by f0rTyLeGz:
doesnt look too happy lol

Resolution - See more of the road - than of me and my camera - in my bicycle mirror
by Drake

Comment by greuu:
Good picture!Super camera!

Resolution - See more of the road - than of me and my camera - in my bicycle mirror
by Drake

Comment by RedHotKK:
Good resolution

"Moon Glow"
by Drake

Comment by vtruan:
Great idea, but I don't like the second moon effect.

The Big Splash!
by Drake

Comment by robbieh:
Great capture!