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| 06/11/2003 09:47:50 AM |
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| 06/11/2003 01:18:47 AM |
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| 06/10/2003 11:54:27 PM |
Hand Drumsby shareinncComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
Had you been able to throw a hand in there, I think it would have given more of the impression of sound, but I get the point totally.
I love how you have lit them from the bottom. I think provides some interest in the shot that it might not have otherwise.
Your focus and clarity are really good. There is a lot of detail in these.
I like the background as well. Nothing distracting there. the dark background works very nicely against the lighter color of the drums.
The angle and framing/cropping are nice as well. I think that they are not crammed in the photo too tightly, but also not spread apart too much. I like the crop.
Overall it's a very nice image. If I had to nit pick, I would mention that there is a blue glowing area near the top of the large bongo that is a bit distracting, however nothing serious. Great job.
~Heather~ |
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| 06/10/2003 09:16:59 PM |
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| 06/10/2003 09:00:52 PM |
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| 06/10/2003 08:37:39 PM |
Refracted Honeyby shareinncComment by ScottK: I'll take your word that it's honey, but the focus is so off there's nothing to really see. Looks like there might have been some interesting motion going on there, but it wasn't captured very well. 3 |
| 06/09/2003 01:24:24 PM |
Predator and Preyby shareinncComment by crabappl3: Howdee,
This is a fine image that is technically fine. There are no obvious flaws or distractions. I feel that it lacks something that captures the viewers attention. The lines of the staples are competeing with the staple remover. This keeps the eye bouncing around the screen trying to find a central object to focus on. The background although not distracting doesn't add any feel to this shot. There is no color to add drama. Some red underneath would have given the viewer the feeling of the attack. That coupled with maybe just the one row of staples with a different camera angle would have pulled this all together for a stronger image. -danny |
| 06/09/2003 01:17:44 PM |
Predator and Preyby shareinncComment by Mitonski: Excellent title, excellent concept, relly brings out the fang qualities of the staple remover... perhaps if you had some "carcases" of staples you removed from somehting lying next to it? That might look pretty funky. My only gripe - A bit more of the whole set-up in focus would have been nice. Good luck with this one. Mitonski |
| 06/09/2003 11:14:34 AM |
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| 06/08/2003 10:55:40 PM |
Hand Drumsby shareinncComment by dsidwell: Very nice still life. I kind of wish they weren't so still, though, to suggest sound more. Nice lighting and composition! |
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