Lighting Experiment
by literateNstylish

Comment by Shrink:
looks like tops cut off. WOuld like to have seen more

Lighting Experiment
by literateNstylish

Comment by MonicaJames:
Not really a good contre-jour for me. 5

Just before...
by literateNstylish

Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Fit: That's a tought one...does the image convery stillness? In a way it does but at first glance it looks like she is walking the horse. This may have garnered a few DNMC votes.

Composition: Splitting the frame with two strong elements is risky as the viwer doesnt know where to look.

Technical: The background is lit up a lot. As some commenters noted, this can be distracting. It also seems your focus was on the horse, not the girl. I think the other way around would have been better.

Feel: Despite what I have said above, I like this shot. Focus on the girl and I may have voted it a 6!

PM me if you have any questions
Gerry

Lighting Experiment
by literateNstylish

Comment by gattamarta:
That's an interesting experiment, but I'm not sure about the cropping, in my opinion there is too much gray on the foreground

Lighting Experiment
by literateNstylish

Comment by emayner:
the light does not obscure the details of the image.

Lighting Experiment
by literateNstylish

Comment by seb-ksl:
Strange but cool for me.

Lighting Experiment
by literateNstylish

Comment by Zeus:
Too much empty space on the bottom, glasses are cut of at the top. Why?

Lighting Experiment
by literateNstylish

Comment by RobMcGee:
blurry where it's supposed to be sharp

Just before...
by literateNstylish

Comment by Dona_k:
I'm not sure what your trying to convey here?

Just before...
by literateNstylish

Comment by pamelasue:
harsh lighting hurts this image