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			|  | 04/09/2007 10:46:39 PM | 
		| | Greetings from the Critique Club 
 Fit: That's a tought one...does the image convery stillness?  In a way it does but at first glance it looks like she is walking the horse.  This may have garnered a few DNMC votes.
 
 Composition: Splitting the frame with two strong elements is risky as the viwer doesnt know where to look.
 
 Technical: The background is lit up a lot.  As some commenters noted, this can be distracting.  It also seems your focus was on the horse, not the girl.  I think the other way around would have been better.
 
 Feel: Despite what I have said above, I like this shot.  Focus on the girl and I may have voted it a 6!
 
 PM me if you have any questions
 Gerry
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			|  | 04/01/2007 05:51:16 AM | 
		| | I'm not sure what your trying to convey here? | 
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			|  | 03/30/2007 10:29:47 AM | 
		| | harsh lighting hurts this image | 
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			|  | 03/29/2007 06:27:57 PM | 
		| | The odd angle of the girls feet bugs me a little. I like the idea here but wish it were more clear what they were "just before" | 
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			|  | 03/29/2007 03:57:31 PM | 
		| | Background is way blown out IMHO. | 
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			|  | 03/28/2007 11:39:50 AM | 
		| | This picture is so sweet. | 
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			|  | 03/28/2007 12:16:28 AM | 
		| | i like the thought in this photo.  the anticipation. | 
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