Heavy J - The Movie
by heavyj

Comment by heavyj:
The FARTHER (FART HER) part was a graphic from another movie that I had sized down quickly. I didn't even think it was that readable. I may make a change, but I'm not in a rush ;)

Penciled In
by heavyj

Comment by blindjustice:
this shows that you graphically have a boatload of talent; an eye, attention to detail> I also really think you have a great compositional style of filling the frame to the prverbial-eighties valley girl max; step back and expand; see the peace in negative space. I ahve added you to my favorite list.

A Stolen Family : A Vengeful Father
by heavyj

Comment by dfstevenson:
Well, one of your five tens was mine. Good processing.

Heavy J - The Movie
by heavyj

Comment by Jedusi:

Originally posted by toddhead: I loved this picture. The spacing in the wording looks like it says FART HER instead of FARTHER. Just thought I'd let you know in case you wanted to adjust it... unless you went FART HER... then it's perfect!

I agree with you toddhead about the FART HER business - but then you wrote 'went' instead of 'meant' so you know . . swings & roundabouts :- )

A Stolen Family : A Vengeful Father
by heavyj

Comment by toddhead:
This picture is proof that the DPC crowd is too Mary Poppins... this is a great photo with very dark undertones and that seems to be too much for some DPC'ers to handle. The 9 1,2,and 3's are simply because you had a gun.

I think this should have been at least .5 higher than it was.

Heavy J - The Movie
by heavyj

Comment by toddhead:
I loved this picture. The spacing in the wording looks like it says FART HER instead of FARTHER. Just thought I'd let you know in case you wanted to adjust it... unless you went FART HER... then it's perfect!

A Stolen Family : A Vengeful Father
by heavyj

Comment by jbsmithana:
94th? 5.8? WTH! You were robbed. Hurt by politics maybe. I'm not a gun guy but still thought this was an excellent shot. Great lighting. Great emotion. Great processing.

A Stolen Family : A Vengeful Father
by heavyj

Comment by GeneralE:
Lighting and processing remind me of old Dutch oil paintings -- suitable for the mood and emotion you are trying to convey.

A Stolen Family : A Vengeful Father
by heavyj

Comment by JeepGirl04:
So I have to say that you have perfectly capture the emotion in this one, as looking at it makes me want to do my job *wink

A Stolen Family : A Vengeful Father
by heavyj

Comment by Quigley:
Jason, this a powerful statement and I do hope people get your point, if they don't their missing out on a fantastically telling image. You have captured a fantastic and difficult emotion to convey and you have done a great job of it. Your lighting and composition are terrific and the DoF is spot on. You have a lot to be proud of with this shot. I find it difficult to photograph myself (noted by the lack of SP's in my portfolio) but may you can it done and done well. Good on you mate and I do hope you do well in this one. I should hope to see this one in the top 10!!

10 from me mate and a well deserved one at that:)

All the best with the challenge.

MAX!