Bottle, starting at the end.
by hajeka

Comment by Artan:
Love the angle you have chosen, I hope the contents are just as good

Eating...
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Comment by karmat:
This is too funny. I think a slightly tighter crop on the right would make it feel more balanced, though.

Pure food
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Comment by PHOTOKID:
Well composed, the whites on the back of sheeps neck are a bit blown.

Pure food
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Comment by Dirt_Diver:
I don't really see this as "pure food" but I do see him drinking water all like this. Maybe the title isn't really helping the picture that much. Other than that this image would be a good one if some of the grass blades werent in front of his face.

Eating...
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Comment by JJWoolls:
Cool photo, it would be even better if you could have caught all three of them taking a bite at the same time...

Pure food
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Comment by goala:
mmmh lamb *gg*

Pure food
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Comment by downtherabbithole:
title makes it a bit a of a strech for the challenge, wish it was something clean our little sheep was drinking out of too.

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Comment by Sting11165:
First impression, 5.

Man, is that girl on the right going to stick that whole thing in her mouth? That could be a compelling image right there.

Sharpness, constrast, and B&W treatment seem appropriate. Composition leaves something to be desired though, I feel like there is too much empty space around the sides. It'd be one thing if it gave a sense of place, but they seem to be sitting by a fence. Just cropping out the right side (from her backpack on) and a little from the left (from his cone on) would make the image more visually pleasing, I think.

This is obviously a candid, but even candids need to be centered around an idea. In this case, I find the guy on the left distracting, because he's not eating. The image has its interesting points (the two girls) but I don't think the guy adds much. An extreme crop of just the two girls' faces and hands (or just the girl on the right) might be interesting. It wouldn't do as well on DPC (voter don't seem to like gross as much) but it'd get the point across.

So, yeah, I'll stick with a 5. You have something here, but it needed a tighter crop to really drive the point home.

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Eating...
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Comment by SoulMan1978:
the three of them doing the same thing makes a nice tableau for me.

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Comment by jonfrommk:
Lovely moment in time capture. Only minor issue is that there appears to be something like an upside down heart over the three people, which is a little distracting. I dont think its part of the general background...Perhaps a bit of dodging and burning to remove this might have helped. Even as it is a strong 7