LIFE
by swaroskji

Comment by thirteen_times:
If she was a little more in focus this would be an amazing shot. 8.

LIFE
by swaroskji

Comment by Koriyama:
a bit dark, emphasised by too much top black, but otherwise an excellent image. I'm in two minds whether or not the faces behind are distracting or not. I think that they add character, certainly.

LIFE
by swaroskji

Comment by KIKI:
VERY NICE -IT HAS A 60'S QUALITY

Coca-Cola TwiLight
by swaroskji

Comment by SweetKali:
yes! light and shadow!

Coca-Cola TwiLight
by swaroskji

Comment by peter_k:
Good attempt at something different but I think it might work better with a closer, tighter crop. Not bad, though.

Coca-Cola TwiLight
by swaroskji

Comment by ninerfan:
Nice sharpness - cool depth of field, and great colors.

Coca-Cola TwiLight
by swaroskji

Comment by qachyk:
That is a very interesting shot, with the whole reminsicent-of-sunset thing going on which from the title I presume was deliberate. The material the bottle is on looks like waves, nice touch.

Coca-Cola TwiLight
by swaroskji

Comment by Fiver:
Seems out of focus.

"Neo, Trinity... NOW!"
by swaroskji

Comment by Lustre:
Critique Club

Composition: You have used an extreme close up of the phone but it works well. It's fairly obvious that it is a phone and the reflection is wonderful. The background on the right side is a little distracting because it's not obvious what it is - although making it so blurred prevents it from distracting the viewer.

Technical Quality: The photo is very good from a technical stand point. Good exposure, lovely colour (very appropriate to the challenge)

Creativity: I love the subject matter - the phone is so significant in the movie and adding a character was a wonderful idea. I'm guessing it's an image from a poster or DVD cover or something similar - great idea.

Meeting the Challenge: You have easily met the challenge - the subject, title and coloring of the photo are spot on.

Overall: For only your second contribution you have done a wonderful job - well done. I look forward to your future work since this entry is so good.

"Neo, Trinity... NOW!"
by swaroskji

Comment by kellie:
very nice