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06/01/2003 07:18:48 PM |
Critique Club
Composition: You have used an extreme close up of the phone but it works well. It's fairly obvious that it is a phone and the reflection is wonderful. The background on the right side is a little distracting because it's not obvious what it is - although making it so blurred prevents it from distracting the viewer.
Technical Quality: The photo is very good from a technical stand point. Good exposure, lovely colour (very appropriate to the challenge)
Creativity: I love the subject matter - the phone is so significant in the movie and adding a character was a wonderful idea. I'm guessing it's an image from a poster or DVD cover or something similar - great idea.
Meeting the Challenge: You have easily met the challenge - the subject, title and coloring of the photo are spot on.
Overall: For only your second contribution you have done a wonderful job - well done. I look forward to your future work since this entry is so good.
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05/27/2003 10:54:16 AM |
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05/27/2003 02:25:53 AM |
| File is too small, otherwise one of the better ones in this challenge. |
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05/25/2003 10:12:47 PM |
| I like the idea of the reflection in the phone - the entrance to and exit from the Matrix. It is so narrow a crop - do you mean to suggest the difficulty of entering and exiting? - a narrow door? I think it would work better with a diffent composition revealing more of the structure of the phone. |
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05/24/2003 03:41:57 PM |
| Good idea. Green could be a bit brighter. 6 |
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05/24/2003 10:56:13 AM |
| good one. I like the way you present the idea. Cropping works |
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05/24/2003 12:46:31 AM |
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05/23/2003 08:23:38 AM |
| Very creative. Nice simple, powerfull composition. Jacko. 10 |
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05/23/2003 02:54:56 AM |
| Great shot. I love the detail and tone of green. Nice depth of field too. |
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05/23/2003 01:50:20 AM |
| ahh excellent reflection... crop is a little tight... but not bad... |
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05/22/2003 06:25:29 PM |
| I love the idea and choice of crop. The only glitch I think is that Trinity looks like she has an alien head LOL! Just Kidding. |
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05/22/2003 12:47:53 AM |
| Good pic, the tight cropping is a little distracting to me, otherwise good pic |
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05/21/2003 08:14:34 PM |
| Very cool, but you should have shown a little more of the phone. What IS showing is great! |
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05/21/2003 01:36:04 PM |
| Really cool, good color too. |
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05/21/2003 01:33:28 PM |
| nice idea this picture was done very nicely and the colors turned out very nice good work |
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05/21/2003 08:53:33 AM |
Wow - I'd believe this was actually a shot from the film itself! You don't know Carrie-Anne Moss personally, do you?
Very well done to catch such a distinct reflection on the telephone handset. Usually I don't like shots with these kind of dimensions but they work perfectly here. Even the green tint is spot-on. Very good work. |
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05/21/2003 08:09:32 AM |
| I love the colors, I love the closeup detail... and is that really Trinity in there or a model?! Whoever it is... dead on! Awesome idea too. |
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05/21/2003 08:01:16 AM |
| Interesting shot. Obviously relevant, but in the end just falls between abstract and representative: the background doesn't seeem to serve much purpose to me - too blurred to place the shot, too busy just to give a depth to the focus. |
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05/21/2003 12:57:17 AM |
| The cropping makes this image so much more interesting! Nice work! |
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