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| 09/22/2007 11:15:42 AM |
iBook Re-readby J-MeComment by see: I must in this challenge vote to how the original photo was presented. Your emulation falls short on a couple of small points. 1 your DOF is much wider, and 2 the number and fanning of the pages are quite different. All and all nice shot and a 7 from me. |
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| 09/21/2007 02:07:07 PM |
Emergingby J-MeComment by odessit40: Cool pic, but i don't think it meets the requirments of the challenge |
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| 09/21/2007 09:47:15 AM |
Emergingby J-MeComment by hotroll: sorry, not a true silhouette.... can see too much detail of the subject. |
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| 09/20/2007 09:00:04 PM |
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| 09/20/2007 01:27:33 AM |
iBook Re-readby J-MeComment by mpeters: Good attempt...YOu probably had a reason for it, but I'd prefer to see the text rotated 90 degrees. 5 |
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| 09/19/2007 07:42:02 PM |
iBook Re-readby J-MeComment by CNovack: Your lighting, sharpness and details are good in this composition. I can 'read' and see the words clearly. The only problems I see with this composition is the edges of the pages and the orientation of the words. For the viewers to 'bite' that the pages naturally belong in the apple it has to look the part. The edges of the book pages need to be nice & sharp as well as cleanly rounding them to the exact shape of the apple (not an easy task I'm sure but one that would pay off in the end). The other critique is that the orientation of the words going on the vertical plane just doesn't work effectively. The words really should be oriented on the horizontal axis much like it would be when you crack open a book to read. None-the-less you made a good attempt at emulating the original. |
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| 09/19/2007 11:23:57 AM |
Bad Nights Means Bad Morningsby J-MeComment by Melethia: I don't know if you know it or not, but a comment from zeuszen is a very, very rare thing. This is a great shot - definitely conveys what you intended, based on your description! |
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| 09/19/2007 02:44:04 AM |
Emergingby J-MeComment by kaarissaa: i wouldnt really concider this a sillhouette.
maybe change hre facial expression or her posture. |
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| 09/17/2007 03:37:46 PM |
iBook Re-readby J-MeComment by LN13: I wish your pages were cut a little more smoothly and and oriented horizontally. |
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| 09/17/2007 03:22:16 PM |
iBook Re-readby J-MeComment by mist: I actually prefer your apple to the original, but I prefer the original's paper leaves. |
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