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09/24/2007 02:48:32 PM |
| you know what they say, an apple a day keeps the DPC trolls away. If only this was maybe a little OOF, you might have gotten that illustrious and coveted score of "1". Oh well. Pretty apple! (lol) |
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09/24/2007 12:04:04 AM |
Almost another Brown Ribbon! Hey, that's an accomplishment in and of itself!
Wonder if there's a trophy for the most brown ribbons?! *grin* |
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09/23/2007 08:20:53 AM |
| Good try. The light background helps here. |
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09/22/2007 11:15:42 AM |
| I must in this challenge vote to how the original photo was presented. Your emulation falls short on a couple of small points. 1 your DOF is much wider, and 2 the number and fanning of the pages are quite different. All and all nice shot and a 7 from me. |
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09/20/2007 09:00:04 PM |
| Sorry but it doesn't look like you tried. |
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09/20/2007 01:27:33 AM |
| Good attempt...YOu probably had a reason for it, but I'd prefer to see the text rotated 90 degrees. 5 |
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09/19/2007 07:42:02 PM |
| Your lighting, sharpness and details are good in this composition. I can 'read' and see the words clearly. The only problems I see with this composition is the edges of the pages and the orientation of the words. For the viewers to 'bite' that the pages naturally belong in the apple it has to look the part. The edges of the book pages need to be nice & sharp as well as cleanly rounding them to the exact shape of the apple (not an easy task I'm sure but one that would pay off in the end). The other critique is that the orientation of the words going on the vertical plane just doesn't work effectively. The words really should be oriented on the horizontal axis much like it would be when you crack open a book to read. None-the-less you made a good attempt at emulating the original. |
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09/17/2007 03:37:46 PM |
| I wish your pages were cut a little more smoothly and and oriented horizontally. |
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09/17/2007 03:22:16 PM |
| I actually prefer your apple to the original, but I prefer the original's paper leaves. |
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09/17/2007 08:01:39 AM |
| Lacks sharpness/focus to me. |
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09/17/2007 04:41:27 AM |
| words should be going the other way. (horizontally) |
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09/17/2007 12:12:31 AM |
| a little rough compared to the original...nice try though |
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