Fragile Soldiers
by ashwin

Comment by chickadee:
There seems to be something on the edge of the chess board beyond the last pawn. Hiding or removing it would have completed a very clean photo.

Fragile Soldiers
by ashwin

Comment by pinback:
Good, apart from that white thing behind the rear pawn.

Suntec City Towers Singapore
by ashwin

Comment by ashwin:
Thanks a lot for your critique.

Message edited by author 2003-05-12 06:48:56.

Suntec City Towers Singapore
by ashwin

Comment by sher:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First, let me preface this by telling you that this is my first official critique. Please bear with me as I learn.

I really like this photo. I think it's a very strong image and the symmetry is great. I'm not one who thinks that a mirror image is necessarily the perfect form of symmetry, rather that the photo should have a balanced look. I think this photo achieves that balance.

Like others have said, the tree at the bottom is distracting and cropping it out would have made the photo stronger. That's really the only thing I can see that I would change.

The colors are nice...pretty blue sky, white clouds without being blown out...good focus and interesting perspective.

All in all, I think this is a very good shot and most impressive for your first submission!

Good luck with future challenges and keep up the good work!

Suntec City Towers Singapore
by ashwin

Comment by KimInNB:
The trees at the bottom break the symmetry - cropping them out would have helped. Nice photo, though

Suntec City Towers Singapore
by ashwin

Comment by gemslinn:
This is nice. I would have prefered that the tree at the bottom not be there.

Suntec City Towers Singapore
by ashwin

Comment by terrentius:
New York?

Suntec City Towers Singapore
by ashwin

Comment by briphoto:
Nice try! Not quite centered, tree at bottom, shadow on building on left.

Suntec City Towers Singapore
by ashwin

Comment by sherryk471:
Immeadately brings to mind another set of "twin towers". Seems to be a little off balance and the bottom part of frame should have the leaves cropped. No the less,this is powerful image.

Suntec City Towers Singapore
by ashwin

Comment by ChrisW123:
Pretty good one... Your shot is a little off meaning you need to move 20 or 30 feet to the left. And should have not included the tree at the buttom.