day1.jpg
by Puckzzz

Comment by JLC:
Beautiful scene! The relfection is perfectly placed! Nicely Done.

day3
by Puckzzz

Comment by violinist123:
Well, clients get what clients want but I think the skin really holds this back. I can see their desire for the marble-like skin, but just a bit of shadow play would have kept those areas from going completely flat.

day3
by Puckzzz

Comment by cogerox:
Good contrast - by that I mean not too much. You have rich tones throughout the tonal range. The makeup creates a very different skin tone on these models which you've captured excellently. The dof accentuates the subject nicely. Great photo.

day3
by Puckzzz

Comment by shalrath:
Nice shot! Great pose and a good bit of blur in the background there to make it pop. Outstanding!

day3
by Puckzzz

Comment by Quigley:
Wonderful shot. I like the feel and the smooth lines. Their gazes are solid and lend a warm feel to the shot. I enjoy the angle and tend to do the same with some of my own shots but usually suffer the critical eye of others on the site telling me, "it would be better if you leveled the horizon" and it is not worth it to tell them that you intended to have the tilt in the first place. The DOF is spot on and the fact that the Girls went the extra mile with the skin makeup is worth loads.
This photo speaks volumes for B&W and is an inspiration to try new things for me thank you for this image. MAX!

Don't chain yourself down...
by Puckzzz

Comment by pwm6:
I think you theme would go better with someone who was more clearly breaking free. Very nice arrangement of visual elements.

day3
by Puckzzz

Comment by pixelpig:
I love the Goth look, difficult for the young & healthy to pull off successfully but still fun. This is well done--I think if you made the BG darker you could make the skin even closer to white.

day3
by Puckzzz

Comment by BeckyT:
Wouldn't have guessed they had bright pink hair. I am not into gothic but you captured very nicely here. Love the contrast you have achieved. Very nice portrait.

Don't chain yourself down...
by Puckzzz

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
I think the text on here is too big. You have a good picture but it just doesn't look right for some reason.

day3
by Puckzzz

Comment by Budya:
Very nice portrait! I really like it. It took me a while to see the second model -- maybe a tighter crop (the whites on the top left corner are somewhat bright for me) would have put more focus on the models. I love how the skin tones came out! Very nice!