Day 1 - Ev
by jonfrommk

Comment by sevilduvarci:
interesting composition, i agree that this needs a bit more contrast.

Day 1 - Ev
by jonfrommk

Comment by bassbone:
I love the half face image - but the contrast (especially in the eyes) could be boosted to give this a lot more jump - nice start

Day 1 - Ev
by jonfrommk

Comment by jackal9:
As has been mentioned, Contrast and I do levels rather than curves most of the time sometimes both, I find it a bit easier to use, JMO. Love the comp. in this though great idea!

Day 1 - Ev
by jonfrommk

Comment by roz:
hi jon .. an unusual and different portrait and i love your composition .. the overall grey and uncontrasty tones doesnt work for me so much .. i also wish his eye was a bit sharper coz its the point of interest ... i've said in my first post, in this b&w challenge, that i want constructive criticism from ppl so i improve, but i feel a bit hesitant to say anything i dont like in someone else's coz i am aware that it's only my opinion ... but i'm gonna try in this challenge to not only say wot i dont like but be very complimentary when i do!!..:)

Day 1 - Ev
by jonfrommk

Comment by Retroesque:
Hey tell Ev he has a GREAT face for photography - GRIN!

I like this shot too, but not loving the post processing.

Think more contrast would have been lovely, and perhaps a little sharpening.

He has a lovely sparkly eye (hope he has a matching one - SMILE!)

Day 1 - Ev
by jonfrommk

Comment by xantangummi:
It's a bit bland and the wall is a bit too sharp

Day 1 - Ev
by jonfrommk

Comment by MAK:
not enough tone in my opinion. needs a curves run over it. I love the crop. Play around with the curves and contrast to create more depth in the B&W.

Tryp Out With Poppies
by jonfrommk

Comment by elizadeb:
Beautiful colors! Very nice shot! *7*

Tryp Out With Poppies
by jonfrommk

Comment by downtherabbithole:
focus issues in the blue one

Tryp Out With Poppies
by jonfrommk

Comment by xXxscarletxXx:
Im not too sure of the colors