year I was born 1954
by whiterook

Comment by heathen:
come on, at least make an effort

year I was born 1954
by whiterook

Comment by rjkstesch:
This has the feel of an old Brownie snapshot. All you're missing is the finger over the lens. ;-)

Million dollars view
by whiterook

Comment by alanfreed:
Well, I'm not sure what you were going for here, but the tilted horizon, foggy effect and weak use of text aren't coming together well for me, I'm afraid.

Million dollars view
by whiterook

Comment by bassbone:
the composition, text, font and angle of the crop really are over the top

Million dollars view
by whiterook

Comment by kteach:
I'm not sure I get this one... photographically, the shot is unappealing and seems hazy with a tilted horizon. As far as the postcard part of the challenge, I don't get the added text, and the font and color choices don't seem to go well with the postcard. Even a few simple fixes like a levels adjustment, rotation and a different font could have been very helpful for this shot.

Million dollars view
by whiterook

Comment by albc28:
I can tell you from past experience that the horizon police are going to be after you. It's definetely tilted way up towards the right. The photo is also pretty cloudy. I don't know if that is an effect or not, but you can't see any detail in the p hoto and barely any color. Your text takes away from the photo as well...."Several 3 million homes behind me"? Did you mean Several $3 Million homes behind me or 3 million homes behind me.

Capecod getting smaller
by whiterook

Comment by indecline:
focus?

Capecod getting smaller
by whiterook

Comment by bryantbus:
Out of focus, no spots??

Million dollars view
by whiterook

Comment by brownsm:
completely washed out, I'm falling over, and boring all around. was this supposed to be making a point?

Million dollars view
by whiterook

Comment by digitalknight:
I'm giving this a 1

Where is the color?
The horizon is sadly out of skew.
There's no color.
The copy is just silly - who would buy a post card that said that?

Better luck in the next challenge.