time to cleaned my basement
by whiterook

Comment by muckpond:
the coloring of this does nothing to help it.

time to cleaned my basement
by whiterook

Comment by brimac:
the light in this one isn't right at all.

Sexy lady
by whiterook

Comment by Tammer:
To me, this seems like just a quick snapshot. Perhaps if you had zoomed in closer, cropping out the front end of the cars and focusing more on her, it would be more effective for me visually.

time to cleaned my basement
by whiterook

Comment by accord:
I like the idea and the treatment generally, but to me it seems a bit too much. I think it could have had more impact if the treatment was pulled back a bit.

Sexy lady
by whiterook

Comment by mist:
I wonder how many comments you have saying that this is too small? I'm guessing more than 10. It's a bit small. There's a good tutorial on resizing images in the Learn - tutorials menu of this site. Is it a mobile phone image?

Aside from it being too small, I guess improvements that you could look at are -

Framing - dead centre subject lack energy.
Background / composition - pretty cluttered, distracts from your subject
Subject - not really prominant enough, the woman is tiny really.

Keep entering.

future hall of famer?
by whiterook

Comment by dahkota:
over lightened. Maybe you need a new monitor?

time to cleaned my basement
by whiterook

Comment by Darkend_Sword:
Great idea but the post edit is not working for me.

future hall of famer?
by whiterook

Comment by AZSnapper:
I thought this was an Advanced Edit challenge..... what the..?

future hall of famer?
by whiterook

Comment by JunieMoon:
Seems to have a fog over the image. Caused a lack of contrast and color.

future hall of famer?
by whiterook

Comment by robdoc:
Washed out. Not sharp