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whiterookComment by HeiSch: If you don't mind a couple of random thoughts:
the set up and composition you chose somehow sends a message it's done fast without real thinking your picture through to the end.
E.g. the paper: if you really play, the paper in the middle should be upside down, right? A person would sit at the top part of the round table and write his/her score. BTW: with what? there are no pencils/pens to record the score.
While cutting/cropping the sheets of paper is a design tool and good, cutting right through the dice is not a good idea. It only shows that when you took the pic or in PP you were not looking out for details. More details: if you show a full house, the game seems to go on already. Show this to me with at least some entries on the paper.
Lightin is from one side only, but with 2 lamps? Try moving one of them the the right and a bit further away (fill light). This way you could avoid these irritating 2 shadows. You wanted to show people playing? Isn't the light then coming from the top? from a lamp right over the table?
I think you see where I'm going? The scene you are showing seems more like a random collection of more or less connected items. Arrange them as it would appear in real life and your picture will come to life all by itself.
There are a tremendous amount of dust specs(?) in your picture. Check your camera, or if it's not your camera, these dust specs should be removed before you shoot.
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