White Spiral
by noraneko

Comment by nheilweil:
pretty composition but having the sand crisply in focus would have helped I think.

Greetings from the Seashore
by noraneko

Comment by levyj413:
This definitely feels like a touristy postcard. :) I think it lacks some "pop," and I'm not sure what to suggest. Either way, though, a fine entry.

Greetings from the Seashore
by noraneko

Comment by JuliBoc:
Yeah Team Novice! Way to go!! I gave this a 10 and didn't even know it was one of ours. Good work.

P.S. I like the way you have the sand showing though the text and border. I didn't notice that before I read your comment. The only suggestion I have is to modify the envelope for the text distortion. I'd like to see the exterior edge (bottom of Charleston, and top of Crabby) straight and parallel to the edge of the card. I like the interior edge curving around the oval window.

Message edited by author 2006-11-27 09:39:18.

White Spiral
by noraneko

Comment by h2:
overall too soft

White Spiral
by noraneko

Comment by C_Steve_G:
Ooh, if only a bit more in focus.

Greetings from the Seashore
by noraneko

Comment by caba:
Amusing, well done

Greetings from the Seashore
by noraneko

Comment by Melethia:
Very cute - I can definitely see this as a postcard in some seaside tourist shack.

Greetings from the Seashore
by noraneko

Comment by 777STAN:
O, Look! Here it is the day after Thanksgiving and this is my first sighting of Sandy Claws! :}

Greetings from the Seashore
by noraneko

Comment by macrothing:
4 - Like the concept. Like to have seen the state put in somewhere, but fairly minor. More important is the color of the matting/frame isn't enhancing the crab in my opinion. Don't mind the font choice, but the font 'distortion' is not exaggerated enough to give it the punch I imagine you were intending. The oval shape seems a bit off (tilted and compositionally), but could be intentional, so again, perhaps exaggerating that a little more might have given this an edge.

A Hawk's Perspective on Electricity
by noraneko

Comment by Blue Moon:
crazy i love that it's looking at you