Garden Bar
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Gracious:
Comments by Grayce for the Critique Club
You chose a nice mix of colors for this lovely still life. Zooming in and "supersizing" the subjects works well here, since you eliminate any distractions.
I like how the carrots are reflected in the celery. Everything looks nice and fresh, and I can almost smell them.
The black background is good as a contrast to the colorful veggies.
For the most part the dof is good, but the carrots are not quite as crisply focused as they could be. As a result there is no real detail on them.
The composition is very good, with the celery drawing the viewer right in.
Lighting is good, colors are very good. There is no noise or digital artifacts.
All in all a very nice picture. Congratulations and keep up the good work!
Regards,

Grayce

Doing Time
by ladpupmoe

Comment by brentg3:
Inside; lifeless, dull, monotone
Outside; life, color, light
Great contrasting ideas, excellent!!

Doing Time
by ladpupmoe

Comment by NeonSpirit:
Novel concept, good exposure considering the difficult lighting conditions

"Happy Face"
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Gallatin:
Nice

Doing Time
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Chuckie:
nice photo good idea.

Doing Time
by ladpupmoe

Comment by robbieh:
Nicely done. I like that you can only see sky and bare tree branches out the window. It adds to the oppressive feeling of the bars and location.

"Happy Face"
by ladpupmoe

Comment by DennisF:
Happy, indeed. Odd eyes - did you redeye correct?

"Happy Face"
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Silver Fox:
sure looks like he's smiling, doesn't she?

Doing Time
by ladpupmoe

Comment by justine:
Very kool---------------Good Luck to ya!

Doing Time
by ladpupmoe

Comment by StevePax:
I wanted to do something like this, but I didn't have the time or a convenient location.