Slicing onions, No Tears Please
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Silver Fox:
nice macro, good color, good lighting,

Architecture Symmetry
by ladpupmoe

Comment by schurg:
you know what, I really like this picture, you did a great job, but, architecturally, this building isn't symmetrical, the ledges just off each side of the arch are not the same, kinda strange, usually architects are on the ball, nice picture though:)

Architecture Symmetry
by ladpupmoe

Comment by inspzil:
Not quite clear enough and looks tilted a little clockwise. The building isn't a great subject but symmetrical enough for me.

Architecture Symmetry
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Natasha:
Nice bold design and colours. Could benefit from being rotated slightly and perhaps cropping off the car park.

Architecture Symmetry
by ladpupmoe

Comment by briphoto:
Nice idea. It's leaning to the right.

Doing Time
by ladpupmoe

Comment by inspzil:
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil

Composition - Great use of some major aspects of photography. First glance shows me some nice use of negative space and leading lines. THe contrast between the blue sky and the dark room is effective. The white mortar stuff around the window is a little distracting, but its overall effects are pretty mild. The contrast is the great thing. I see you other commenters also noticed.

Technique - Excellent exposure on this one. The framing looks like it would be a little better if the window (and this is my eye seeing this, maybe not everyone's) didn't appear to be tilting toward me at the bottom. It might've been better to square up the window with the picture even if it isn't really like that. It would look better I think. DOF is good and the picture is pretty sharp.

Overall - This is a pretty good pic. It could use a little something in the composition to show either some despair on the inside or something a little happier on the outside. I keep thinking in my head of a hot air balloon out the window or something like that. I think the despair angle would be a better one to pursue. Its a nice image and definitely has its place. Nice photo and good luck in the future - Inspzil

Architecture Symmetry
by ladpupmoe

Comment by gemslinn:
Nice choice

Architecture Symmetry
by ladpupmoe

Comment by dsidwell:
I find the lower part of this building mundane, then that giant curve lifts my eye in a very simple way and makes the image work pretty well for me.

Architecture Symmetry
by ladpupmoe

Comment by brentg3:
slightly rotated

Architecture Symmetry
by ladpupmoe

Comment by K-Rob:
Off canter just a bit. A quick run through a photo editor could fix that.