Day1:TheStairs.jpg
by Shmee

Comment by emily212:
needs more contrast but nice image for min, I dont know what else maybe a little straiting but thats all.

Day1:TheStairs.jpg
by Shmee

Comment by Jutilda:
I like the idea of this a lot. I'd first tilt it to the right about 1 or two degrees. Then the bricks on the right would be "even." I'd work with levels (particularlu midtones) and possibly selective neutrals and try removing some of the black and you mid have a touch less of the under exposed sense of it. Some filters (virtual photographer) might be able to help out with this endeavor and still keep the integrity of the shot. Keep up the work. You're getting there.

Day1:TheStairs.jpg
by Shmee

Comment by cogerox:
This is quite dramatic and I love the pov. Yes, its a little dark, but with curves/levels and some dodgeing/burning it should work very well.

Day 2: Farm land.jpg
by Shmee

Comment by cogerox:
I find that happens a lot with me. What I see in my head doesn't necessarily match what I see on my screen. Yes, frustrating. However, I think this has a great deal of potential to be a really nice photo. You have some nice lines happening and an interesting sky. Lots to work with. You say you've already pped it. I'm looking forward to seeing it.

Day 3: Waiting
by Shmee

Comment by Melethia:
I quite like these and agree with the one you chose. I think in post if you can just bring out the light in the eyes a touch and just a bit on the skin this will have a very ethereal feel to it. Very nice composition and well shot for a self portrait!

Day 3: Waiting
by Shmee

Comment by Alicia:
Colors and composition are very good. It does have a dreamy quality to it, which is fitting for this photo. Your expression and body language really convey a story.

Day 3: Waiting
by Shmee

Comment by timfythetoo:
This is great. I prefer the color to the b&w and this shot here to your alternates. This is a great base pic that will handle all of the things you wished it had in PP. You should be able to make it just like you envisioned it - even the shades open a bit more part could be fairly easy. Very creative work here.

Isabella
by Shmee

Comment by sidpixel:
Lovely image, very appealing

Day 3: Waiting
by Shmee

Comment by TCGuru:
What a well thought out shot. It looks like the subject heard something outside while waiting on someone and went over to check it out. Very good job!

Day 2: Farm land.jpg
by Shmee

Comment by noraneko:
Great leading line. This has a great deal of potential. I imagine with some warming and highlighting this is quite superb.