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sunraygpComment by kandykarml: score - 5
This is somewhat of a stretch for me regarding the challenge, but I don't mind a stretch if the outcome is better then average.. I think you could have gotten away with a tighter crop, maybe focusing on the line up to the gentleman in the brown shirt.. It still would have shown the line & it would have made it a bit more intimate.. And, there would have been less to distract the eye.. :-)
The white's seem pretty blown out so I'm guessing this was the mid part of the day and it was a very grey sky or overcast.. I find that I always seem to shoot at the wrong time of day and using the "s" curve really can help that.
I do love images of people who don't seem to realize their picture is being taken and you did a great job at capturing that.. I think if you added a small thin black border, then it would have done this justice and finished it off..
Nice job on the focusing and maybe just a touch more of sharpness this would have been a 6.. Overall, you met the challenge and turned in a nice capture!! Keep up the nice work.. :-)
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