hit the point...
by neoathematrix

Comment by JamieWillmott:
This would have been good for the perspective challenge.

hit the point...
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Comment by PTLParsons:
Took me a minute to understand your title. Now I get it. Would have been a little easier if the photo had been a little lighter. And that's all it needs. Everything else is great. Love the motion. Great motion shot. Lighten it a little and you have a winner.

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Comment by Allen:
i like how the train was moving in this picute. All the light comming in from the right helps bring alot of intrrest to the picture. Nice Work

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Comment by calaille:
Good eye capturing the converging lines, with motion of the train towards the "point". 8

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Comment by jmsetzler:
excellent shot.. one of my favorites this week... I think your shutter speed was perfect to catch the slight blur on the train... great work :) = 10 - setzler

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Comment by tiff:
You image is very nice i like it alot. you did a very nice job. I like the fuzz of the train. Great job i hope you win.

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Comment by indigo997:
I like the colors in this picture and the lines are great. The convergence point is almost too centered for my taste, but it's still an interesting shot. 7

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Comment by thatguy:
Good image. I like how the train is blurred. Nice job.

fence
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Comment by zadore:
...from Critique Club...

Hi Jens

FIRST IMPRESSION:
Nice sky!

COMPOSITION:
Since there is no 'real' subject in the photo, it's hard to judge the composition. I think you did a great job on the angle of the fence. I would have cropped the bottom a bit to lose the top of the building showing on the bottom right. :)

TECHNICAL:
I think a bit more DOF would have helped the photo. It would make the fence a bit sharper against that brillian sky (not sure if you can control that on your camera or not) Exposure is perfect. Really need that fence in focus though :|

ARTISTIC:
The sky really makes the shot. I hope you tried different angles on the fence and even get more of the fence in. It makes a nice pattern. As for meeting the challenge...sure, there are tons of squares :)

OVERALL:
A solid shot of a solid sky and a fence. Nicely done :)

Cheers and good luck in the future challenges.

hit the point...
by neoathematrix

Comment by Silver Fox:
You've captured the speed of the train really nicely, that blurred feature on the door and window is really nice. The photo is sharp and is in focus, and the colors are bright, but I don't understand the story that you're trying to tell me.