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02/04/2003 10:04:37 PM |
...from Critique Club...
Hi Jens
FIRST IMPRESSION:
Nice sky!
COMPOSITION:
Since there is no 'real' subject in the photo, it's hard to judge the composition. I think you did a great job on the angle of the fence. I would have cropped the bottom a bit to lose the top of the building showing on the bottom right. :)
TECHNICAL:
I think a bit more DOF would have helped the photo. It would make the fence a bit sharper against that brillian sky (not sure if you can control that on your camera or not) Exposure is perfect. Really need that fence in focus though :|
ARTISTIC:
The sky really makes the shot. I hope you tried different angles on the fence and even get more of the fence in. It makes a nice pattern. As for meeting the challenge...sure, there are tons of squares :)
OVERALL:
A solid shot of a solid sky and a fence. Nicely done :)
Cheers and good luck in the future challenges. |
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02/02/2003 10:45:49 AM |
| I love the color of the sky, interesting shot. |
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02/02/2003 08:14:59 AM |
| Beautiful colours. I think a dead on shot would made the squares stand out even more. Jacko. |
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01/31/2003 02:10:33 PM |
| I love the colors in this photo. Seeing the sky through the black fence is nice. |
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01/31/2003 12:44:55 PM |
Composition: Slightly lacking interest. Something silouetted in the pic would be nice I think.
Technical: Focus is off a bit of the left side, which due to the size is a little obvious
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Excellent idea and good photography. An extra subject would make it for me. 6 |
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01/30/2003 11:37:07 PM |
| A wonderful sky, and I like the repeating pattern of the fence. The fence seems a touch out of focus though, I think sharper would be really cool, and you probably should have cropped the building out of the bottom. |
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01/30/2003 12:43:06 AM |
| Great colors. Beatiful sky. Although the fence doesn't add as much as it could. I think I'd prefer to see the rust on the fence, or at least some more detail. Perhaps a flash with slow sync could pull out the detail in the fence. |
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01/29/2003 03:53:18 PM |
| nice sky.. your photo is similar to mine, "Squares and Sky" |
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01/29/2003 10:45:44 AM |
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01/29/2003 08:57:36 AM |
| Nice colours in the sky. jgillard6 |
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01/28/2003 11:36:35 PM |
| Nice shot, good color and lighting. |
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01/27/2003 07:39:12 PM |
| Great colors and composition! Cub |
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01/27/2003 06:22:12 PM |
| Don't like the stuff in the bottom right hand corner, but the colors are beautiful & you meet the challenge IMO. 7 |
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01/27/2003 12:40:25 AM |
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