Stormy Times
by OneSweetSin

Comment by sebadore:
i really like the composition but not the most original idea.
could be sharper..

Stormy Times
by OneSweetSin

Comment by casualguy:
When I starting looking over all the TIME entries, I was hoping to find some good examples that would pull off the challenge without using a 'clock'..... What I am finding is that the better photos (in most cases) include clocks of some kind. I can't fault those who took great shots with 'clock' subject matter now can I?

I find your choice of orientation and composition to be very pleasing and a nice departure. Nice job!

Stormy Times
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Jeileen:
This would be really cool if the skies were cloudy and stormy looking. As the sky is - would have considered catching a different time....

Stormy Times
by OneSweetSin

Comment by justine:
Very cool looking clock.....wow, neat perspective view.

Stormy Times
by OneSweetSin

Comment by tiff:
Nice job

Body Part Number 1
by OneSweetSin

Comment by timj351:
Critique Club critique by Tim Jensen

To be honest this appears to be a photo that was entered at the last moment when you didn't have a better idea. I don't mean to be harsh but I just don't find this to be a very compelling photo. I feel it is borderline in meeting the challenge as well because you created the 1 shape yourself so it wasnt naturally occurring. But it's probably close enough. If you had to use your own hand then I think you should have tried to create a semi-abstract, compositionally strong image. Strong, contrasty light and maybe the use of black and white would have created a more visually appealing photo. There is interesting texture in the wall and more could have been done with that with some strong sidelighting. I hope this helps. It's all good practice and that is the main point of this site so I hope you can use this advice in a positive way.

Tim

The Kitchen Light
by OneSweetSin

Comment by alanfreed:
It's a bit abstract for the challenge, in my opinion.

In the Eye of the Slide
by OneSweetSin

Comment by DennisF:
Very interesting.

In the Eye of the Slide
by OneSweetSin

Comment by lionelm:
I like the shot a lot but do not meet the challenge for me. 7 an other week. 5 this week.

In the Eye of the Slide
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Dustin:
nice pic. good job.