Parading Along In Captivity
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Paige:
Critique Club

This shot has an emotional quality to it, I could see it along with a newspaper article describing elephants in captivity, but for this challenge, I think it is lacking. Most people were looking for a more natural representation of Fauna.

Your composition is good, as good as you could do under the circumstances. The bland sky is somewhat distracting, maybe if you could have gotten higher and shot down on them.

Focus is a bit blurry, a faster shutter speed to stop their movements may of helped with this if it was possible.

I like the title, adds to the emotional impact.

Overall a good picture that probably would have scored higher in the photojournalism challenge.

Paige

Penn State Altoona
by OneSweetSin

Comment by nathaliedoo:
nice shot but I wonder if this format is a postcard format ?? IMHO I would have preferred another color for the frame, one you can find in the picture or black. Nice composition. Good luck!

DPChallenge Color
by OneSweetSin

Comment by GeneralE:
We have to find a digital equivalent to the filmstrip motif...

Keepin the Rails Going
by OneSweetSin

Comment by elliottwhitley:
No real subject in the photo, try different framing

Prints with a View
by OneSweetSin

Comment by GeneralE:
Like many entries, I think this could use one more line specifically explaining it\'s photographic prints for sale -- don\'t think it would be clear or enticing enough to \"outsiders.\" At least you included a photo!

Life of Steel
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Swashbuckler:
All well taken images. The center one is a bit hard to tell what it is, but the others seem pretty recognizable. Seems more like that latter half "Life of Steel", how about Rust Starts Here? It's a nice collection of shots, but I'm having a hard time getting into it. 7 Rob the Swash

DPChallenge Color
by OneSweetSin

Comment by mcrael:
Nicely done. Eye catching and simple.

DPChallenge Color
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Jeileen:
Nice.

Prints with a View
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Jeileen:
Good layout. Unfortunately the image does not entice me.

Prints with a View
by OneSweetSin

Comment by webster:
Do not like photo.