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05/05/2003 12:05:02 PM |
Critique Club
This shot has an emotional quality to it, I could see it along with a newspaper article describing elephants in captivity, but for this challenge, I think it is lacking. Most people were looking for a more natural representation of Fauna.
Your composition is good, as good as you could do under the circumstances. The bland sky is somewhat distracting, maybe if you could have gotten higher and shot down on them.
Focus is a bit blurry, a faster shutter speed to stop their movements may of helped with this if it was possible.
I like the title, adds to the emotional impact.
Overall a good picture that probably would have scored higher in the photojournalism challenge.
Paige
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04/29/2003 11:29:47 PM |
| Not too bad, but that tree is growing right out of the lead elephants head. |
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04/27/2003 11:01:15 PM |
| There appears to be a tree growing out of the front elephants head... unfortunate placement. |
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04/26/2003 09:40:55 PM |
| These girls are a bit frightening. Snapshot quality - did you try any more? |
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04/23/2003 11:07:46 AM |
| some nice fauna there, ha? :-) |
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04/23/2003 10:04:27 AM |
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